Call #2: On Crafting Your Book Description 3/17/2016
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We checked in and then edited four book descriptions, provided by you and Ezra and I.
HANDOUT -- Book Descriptions Edited
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16:59:15 From Ezra Barany's iPad : ta da!
16:59:50 From Nadine Travers : hello
16:59:56 From Saille : trying to use my tablet as well. we will see
17:00:26 From Nadine Travers : Your eyebrows yes
17:00:43 From Nadine Travers : try this ezra
17:00:55 From Nadine Travers : do you see my noise?
17:06:39 From Nadine Travers : Hi Carol!!
17:06:52 From Hugh Tipping : C A R O L !
17:08:12 From Saille : hi Carol!
17:09:15 From Carol : Hey Saille.
17:09:25 From Carol : How you doin', Hugh?
17:09:29 From Carol : Hi Nadine.
17:09:46 From Hugh Tipping : Doing great, Carol, especially now that I’m talking’ wit my peeps!
17:15:07 From Carol : Extra word - "The"
17:16:00 From Hugh Tipping : Love this!
17:27:10 From Nadine Travers : me too!!
17:27:49 From Nadine Travers : university
17:27:54 From Carol : Nadine, what does the "I" stand for?
17:28:11 From Nadine Travers : Intelligence Agency
17:28:16 From Carol : Cool.
17:29:36 From Carol : He can't speak, so it flips his words.
17:29:42 From Nadine Travers : lol
17:30:52 From Carol : Yep. Good elements.
17:31:07 From Nadine Travers : yes 10 books series
17:31:29 From Saille : sounds like urban fantasy
17:31:30 From Carol : Wow! That's a big series. All different characters each book, right?
17:32:43 From Nadine Travers : 9 couple + 1 book final fight and epilogue
17:33:06 From Hugh Tipping : I’m impressed. That’s ambitious.
17:33:21 From Carol : Instead of "weird" in the first sentence, how about extra-ordinary circumstances since what witches do is weird. Just sayin'.
17:33:52 From Carol : CIW - center intelligence werewolves.
17:34:00 From Carol : Central
17:34:53 From Carol : Does that mean she's older than Rook?
17:45:16 From Ezra Barany's iPad : dxsdsssqSaduuyhyah j bbv
17:45:54 From Trent : Better late than never
17:46:54 From Nadine Travers : Hi Trent
17:50:22 From Hugh Tipping : Instead of “where”, say “there”
17:50:37 From Trent : agree with Hugh
17:50:47 From Hugh Tipping : :)
17:51:49 From Trent : why leave behind lightheartedness?
17:52:07 From Hugh Tipping : Perhaps: He must leave behind his lightheartedness to take on the heavy burden of running a kingdom recovering from the 75 year reign of an evil king.
17:53:22 From Trent : lightheartedness could work in a king
17:54:12 From Hugh Tipping : I’d leave out the cooking reference. This is a heavy, and serious paragraph and that seems out of place to me.
17:55:00 From Hugh Tipping : I remember when she killed those soldiers. :) It was disturbing.
17:56:33 From Hugh Tipping : a radical?
17:57:10 From Trent : I don't like either maverick or loose can, but not sure what would be better.
17:57:49 From Carol : How bout "execute" a bank heist?
17:58:51 From Hugh Tipping : referring to the loose cannon -> radical
17:59:00 From Carol : How about Jaxter's Jollity?
17:59:40 From Hugh Tipping : An eccentric?
18:00:10 From Hugh Tipping : AWESOME!
18:00:17 From Nadine Travers : Yes!!
18:00:37 From Nadine Travers : Editing
18:00:45 From Carol : Editing, editing, editing, editing, editing, editing.....
18:00:49 From Hugh Tipping : FINISH THE WORLD BUILDING! AAGH!
18:00:58 From Trent : getting busy
18:01:04 From Hugh Tipping : I’m ambitous
18:01:32 From Saille : finish my editing....and getting ready for camp nano in april
18:01:39 From Hugh Tipping : I love this live editing. I find it educational and motivating.
18:02:11 From Nadine Travers : after new project a head!!
18:02:37 From Carol : Ah, to be taller.
18:02:43 From Saille : not me, not with savy. rose and I are in a cabin on the nano site. anyone is welcome
18:02:59 From Hugh Tipping : Carol, you don’t need to be taller. You’re not “short”. You are concentrated awesomeness.
18:03:06 From Saille : sure will
18:03:07 From Nadine Travers : I'm short too
18:03:10 From Carol : Thank you, Hugh.
18:03:31 From Carol : Good night. Don't drink too much. Happy Anniversary!!!!!!
18:03:36 From Hugh Tipping : Happy Anniversary! <3 <3
18:03:42 From Nadine Travers : Happy anniversary!!
18:03:46 From Carol : bye
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