VIDEO

1st GROUP CALL OF THE MONTH

We came together for the 1st group call of the month.

We started with our metaphor check ins on our writing -- a word or phrase to express how you're feeling about your writing or editing or marketing, or a combination of these.

Then we took the time to answer any questions you had -- about anything. We discussed promotions and shared celebrations.

** NEW!* One person gets to be in the hot seat for feedback/editing/critique.

We can focus on a piece of writing (up to 250 words), or marketing (like a branding message) or tweets for a campaign or a marketing plan/campaign) or anything else.

Perfect for doing an in-depth edit of a page of your manuscript!

First come first serve. We'll spend 20 minutes on you!

To claim your spot, just email be at bethbarany@gmail.com with your material by day before the call by 9pm PT.

Trent was in the Hot Seat in this call. We edited the first page of his novel together.

TOPIC: Editing for Show vs Tell at the Scene Level

-- What challenges do you have about showing vs telling?
-- Do you know when to show and when to tell?
-- Can you identify when your scenes start and stop?

**What other questions do you have on this topic that we didn't answer in the call. Post them in the group.

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CHAT TEXT

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Trent's Before and After Text